My major is computer science and information engineering,"CSIE" for short.Why I chose CSIE be my major is that I like computer.When I was a senior high school student and ready to go to university,my garde of entrance exam of university can let me enter the department of CSIE of National Taiwan University of Science and Technology,or I have to enter the Department of Electronic Engineering of National Taipei University of Technology.But my teacher in senior high school suggest me to choose the National Taiwan University of Science and Technology,so I choose National Taiwan University of Science and Technology,and CSIE to be my major.
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I think the context you wrote did not relate to the topic sentence.
You say the reason you chosed CSIE is that you like computer,right? But in the context, you say that the decision was beyond the teacher's suggestion.
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I feel you have to write why intrest in CSIE and have enough
support it.
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