People usually used to communication by telephone or mail in a long distance. But, people now have more way to choose in communication, which is msn, msn make people’s communication faster, safer, more esoteric, and clearer than the way people used to communicate. And the effect to modern’s life is the change of communication way.
If people want to communication by writing words in letter foretime, they normally need at least one day to send it. But, if they use msn to type words on the internet, the time which they need to type words and send it is less than half minute, and you do not to have to worry about the message would lost like sending mails, the message you send by msn rarely lost, so, msn is faster and safer than the traditional way to send words. So people seldom want send mail to friends today.
People sometimes may care about that their talk would be heard by the others. But if you msn to communication, then the besetment would be exist anymore. When you are communicating by msn, the other people who near you, they can not know what you are talking about by listening, the only sound they can hear are many clicks. Therefore msn is more esoteric than the traditional way to communicate, and many times people use msn to communicate instead talking with friends face to face.
Some people who just can not talk very clear in telephone, but in msn, the problem is easy to solve. If the person you are communicating do not understand what you want to convey in msn, the msn also allow you to paint on the chat space, and send files, that make many people more like to stay home talking to their friends than telephone.
In conclusion, msn make many people’s life more convenient, but, there are some bad effects in modern’s life, msn may let many people do not want socialize outside, that can cause their socialization getting worth.
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You have clear point to express your opioion. And your topic sentence is "Msn make people’s communication faster, safer, more esoteric, and clearer than the way people used to communicate."
And then you give examples to support above properties. I think your have good ability of orginize.
Good job!!
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Your article describes the topic very clearly, but there are some grammar mistakes and misspelling. I think you can correct them and make the article more organized.
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